22A Elevator Pitch #3
Mark Candela
Elevator Pitch #3
Pitching Practice Makes "Perfect"
Based on the previous feedback from my last 3 elevator pitches, I have been able to clarify my voice and speak with more diction as suggested. I have attempted to speak more clearly and louder. The feedback has been wonderful and has helped assist in pushing me to strive for my goals and achieve what I believe to be possible. I greatly appreciate the support!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0it6yJWAafg
Elevator Pitch #3
Pitching Practice Makes "Perfect"
Based on the previous feedback from my last 3 elevator pitches, I have been able to clarify my voice and speak with more diction as suggested. I have attempted to speak more clearly and louder. The feedback has been wonderful and has helped assist in pushing me to strive for my goals and achieve what I believe to be possible. I greatly appreciate the support!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0it6yJWAafg
Hey Mark!
ReplyDeleteFrom the improvement you talk about, about tone and voice, I think you hit the nail right on the head and definitely improved with the feedback given to you! Great introduction and delivery of the message; I think you did a fantastic job overall. The only tip/feedback that I would give would be to dress more professional next time and make sure to be standing up, but besides that great work!
Hi Mark,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch was very good, and I think you improved the tone of your voice. Excellent your business idea since it is very useful for all people who have problems finding parking. The intro was super good because you capture your audience. You did an amazing job and your idea is perfect for the current situation in Gainesville as it is difficult to find parking in some places. Nice job!
Hey Mark,
ReplyDeleteI like how you started off your pitch with telling us who your potential customers are. It clarifies the scale your business can potentially grow to. I think you highlighted the issue and frustration drivers can have in heavily packed areas and I liked how you followed this with a clear, easy, and relieving solution to their problems.